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Thursday, February 23, 2012
Characters in the First Chapter
What is the relationship between Darcy Wills, Tarah, Cooper Hodden, and Hakeem Randall? (Student ID)
Darcy's ex-boyfriend Hakeem, and Tarah's boyfriend Cooper, but Darcy and Tarah are best friend in the Buford school. First time they don't like to each other, however they student in same school and some class. One day Darcy's teacher makes group for the project work, and she makes Darcy's group with Tarah; in this way they are become good friend each other. 996631
Dear 996631, Oh! Your last entry was so much improved! You have details to support your answer. Now--concentrate on "s"-- You show that you understand 's (possessive) and _s for verbs. Can you find places where you forgot the plural _s? Keep on writing! I see improvement! Dr. Kennedy
Darcy Wills and Tarah are best friend.
ReplyDeleteCooper Hodden is Tarah boyfriend.
Hakeem Randall is Darcy ex boyfriend.
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Darcy's ex-boyfriend's name Hakeem, and Tarah's boyfriend's name Cooper, but Darcy and Tarah are best friend in Buford school. 996631
ReplyDeleteDarcy and Tarah are best friends, Cooper Hodden is Tarah's boyfriend and Hakeem Randall was Darcy's ex-boyfriend. 995645
ReplyDeleteDarcy's ex-boyfriend Hakeem, and Tarah's boyfriend Cooper, but Darcy and Tarah are best friend in the Buford school. First time they don't like to each other, however they student in same school and some class. One day Darcy's teacher makes group for the project work, and she makes Darcy's group with Tarah; in this way they are become good friend each other. 996631
ReplyDeleteDear 996631,
ReplyDeleteOh! Your last entry was so much improved! You have details to support your answer. Now--concentrate on "s"-- You show that you understand 's (possessive) and _s for verbs. Can you find places where you forgot the plural _s?
Keep on writing! I see improvement!
Dr. Kennedy