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Wednesday, March 7, 2012
You are Darcy!
Pretend you are Darcy. Write a letter to Hakeem explaining your relationship with Brian Mason. Include your reactions to the attempted rape and what you learned. Include what you HOPE Hakeem's reaction will be. (Student ID)
Hi, Hakeem this is Darcy, "I would like to tell you about my relationship with Brian Mason". Hakeem when you leave me alone in this summer, I have relation with Brian. I went his apartment whit him, and we are kissing each other; first I don't spot him, but then I realize; he is going to rape me. My father comes on time, and he safes my life. Hakeem now, "I'm understand without knowing people don't go with them alone". Please Hakeem don't hate me because I really want back you as my boyfriend as before. 996631
Hakeem, I too have a secret. This summer I met a guy. He is Lissell's brother. I felt so lonely with your absence and I was so upset. I babysat Lissell's baby this summer, that's how I met him. We went out for a while Hakeem. But one day I went to his apartment and things got out of control, and he wouldn't stop. I didn't want to, I was telling him to stop but he wouldn't. If my dad hadn't showed up Brian would have raped me Hakeem. I knw it was my fault for going to his apartment alone. I was scared to tell you all this. I didn't know how to. Now it's my turn to ask for forgiveness Hakeem. *I personally think that Hakeem's reaction was great. If I was a guy and my loved one had told me this, I would do the same thing. I think that a rape situation must be so terrible. It's all about being careful of your actions. You have to know the people you are hanging around with. *993855
Hi, Hakeem this is Darcy, "I would like to tell you about my relationship with Brian Mason". Hakeem when you leave me alone in this summer, I have relation with Brian. I went his apartment whit him, and we are kissing each other; first I don't spot him, but then I realize; he is going to rape me. My father comes on time, and he safes my life. Hakeem now, "I'm understand without knowing people don't go with them alone". Please Hakeem don't hate me because I really want back you as my boyfriend as before. 996631
ReplyDeleteHakeem,
ReplyDeleteI too have a secret. This summer I met a guy. He is Lissell's brother. I felt so lonely with your absence and I was so upset. I babysat Lissell's baby this summer, that's how I met him. We went out for a while Hakeem. But one day I went to his apartment and things got out of control, and he wouldn't stop. I didn't want to, I was telling him to stop but he wouldn't. If my dad hadn't showed up Brian would have raped me Hakeem. I knw it was my fault for going to his apartment alone. I was scared to tell you all this. I didn't know how to. Now it's my turn to ask for forgiveness Hakeem.
*I personally think that Hakeem's reaction was great. If I was a guy and my loved one had told me this, I would do the same thing. I think that a rape situation must be so terrible. It's all about being careful of your actions. You have to know the people you are hanging around with.
*993855