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Wednesday, March 7, 2012
You are Hakeem!
Pretend you are Hakeem. Write a letter to Darcy explaining your relationship with Anika. Include what you learned from the experience. (Student ID)
If I'm a Hakeem than I write a letter to Darcy like that. Hi, my love I really apologize bout yesterday. I want to tell you about Anika, I don't have love feeling in my heart for as I as for you sweet heart. Yesterday I hate myself for makes you crying you. So, I want to talk to you Pleas give me some time. YOUR LOVER ,HAK. 996631
My little star, I know i had done a big mistake, so This letter is to tell you and explain what happened with Anika. First of all let me tell you, you are my life, my breath, my dream, my sunshine, my heart, and my reason to still alive. I cannot live without you my little princess forgive me for what I had done. I promise never betray you again i hope you can understand That I am a human and humans make mistakes. I accepted my blame I know I should think first until to did this behind your back. sincerely: 993923
Dear Darcy I just want to tell you the truth about Anika, but I want you to understand me. Anika is a girl who I know in Detroit , but I don't need her anymore, I only want you understand me because I still love you. I don't want to hurt you, Darcy, and I want to talk to you peaceably. I want to talk to you face to face, and I am going to explain you with more details.
If i pretend being Hakeem, Hi I just want it to say that i have nothing to do with Anika and we are just friend. I dont care any other girls because you are the one I care the most. If i only get the chance to probe my love for you nothing will stop me from being away from you. I wish i can be with you right now to hug you and be with you all of the time. so, please forgive me if i really hurt your feelings because I never wanted to to hurt you. please comeback, I love you...
If I pretend being Hakeem I will say: Hi I just want it to say that I have nothing to do with Anika and we are just friend. I don't care any other girls because you are the one I care the most. If I only get the chance to prove my love for you that is real and their is nothing will stop me from being away from you. I wish i can be with you right now to hug you, kiss you, and being with you all of the time. So, please forgive me If I really hurt your feelings because I never wanted to hurt you. please comeback, I love you...
Darcy i write you the letter to confess all the true about this girl that i meet in Detroit named Anika, i want tell you that i did go out with her, that i kissed her, but i did it because i felt depress, i felt lonely, but the only person i love and no mater what happen will always love is you Darcy.
Dear Darcy, I can't explain to you how terrible I feel about all this situation. I know I caused so many damage; but i am so sorry. I'm going so crazy. What I did was so low. I should've told you from the beggining, but I just didn't know how to. I want to fix everything Darcy. I love you still and can't imagine my life without you. I am begging for your forgiveness Darcy. I want to show you that what we started toguether never ended. Please give me a chance. What happened with Anika was just a time of confusion, nothing real. Please Darcy I beg. LOVE, HAK *993855
Dear, Darcy The thigs did not happened the way that Anika said. It true I know her but there is a lot that she said that it was not true. you need to listen to me and I need to talk to you but i know that you wont let me talk so that is why I am writing this letter to you so I can tell you what realy happened with Anika. Last summer when I moved to Detroit I was realy upset and I never though that I was going to see you again so I was this day out side of my house playing my guiter and met Anika she is beautiful and I failed for her Darcy you need to understand I am a man and I though I was never going to see you again and so me and Anika Went out two time with kisse but nothings else happened. I love you And I know that You love me too so just talk to me and tell me what you think. haaaa---kkeeen
If I'm a Hakeem than I write a letter to Darcy like that. Hi, my love I really apologize bout yesterday. I want to tell you about Anika, I don't have love feeling in my heart for as I as for you sweet heart. Yesterday I hate myself for makes you crying you. So, I want to talk to you Pleas give me some time. YOUR LOVER ,HAK. 996631
ReplyDeleteMy little star, I know i had done a big mistake, so This letter is to tell you and explain what happened with Anika. First of all let me tell you, you are my life, my breath, my dream, my sunshine, my heart, and my reason to still alive. I cannot live without you my little princess forgive me for what I had done. I promise never betray you again i hope you can understand That I am a human and humans make mistakes. I accepted my blame I know I should think first until to did this behind your back.
ReplyDeletesincerely:
993923
Dear 993923,
ReplyDeleteYou are so romantic!
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ReplyDeleteDarcy I just want to tell you the truth about Anika, but I want you to understand me. Anika is a girl who I know in Detroit , but I don't need her anymore, I only want you understand me because I still love you. I don't want to hurt you, Darcy, and I want to talk to you peaceably. I want to talk to you face to face, and I am going to explain you with more details.
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If i pretend being Hakeem, Hi I just want it to say that i have nothing to do with Anika and we are just friend. I dont care any other girls because you are the one I care the most. If i only get the chance to probe my love for you nothing will stop me from being away from you. I wish i can be with you right now to hug you and be with you all of the time. so, please forgive me if i really hurt your feelings because I never wanted to to hurt you. please comeback, I love you...
ReplyDelete981384
If I pretend being Hakeem I will say: Hi I just want it to say that I have nothing to do with Anika and we are just friend. I don't care any other girls because you are the one I care the most. If I only get the chance to prove my love for you that is real and their is nothing will stop me from being away from you. I wish i can be with you right now to hug you, kiss you, and being with you all of the time. So, please forgive me If I really hurt your feelings because I never wanted to hurt you. please comeback, I love you...
ReplyDelete981384
Darcy i write you the letter to confess all the true about this girl that i meet in Detroit named Anika, i want tell you that i did go out with her, that i kissed her, but i did it because i felt depress, i felt lonely, but the only person i love and no mater what happen will always love is you Darcy.
ReplyDeleteoxox muahz love you
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Dear Darcy,
ReplyDeleteI can't explain to you how terrible I feel about all this situation. I know I caused so many damage; but i am so sorry. I'm going so crazy. What I did was so low. I should've told you from the beggining, but I just didn't know how to. I want to fix everything Darcy. I love you still and can't imagine my life without you. I am begging for your forgiveness Darcy. I want to show you that what we started toguether never ended. Please give me a chance. What happened with Anika was just a time of confusion, nothing real. Please Darcy I beg.
LOVE, HAK
*993855
Dear, Darcy
ReplyDeleteThe thigs did not happened the way that Anika said.
It true I know her but there is a lot that she said that it was not true. you need to listen to me and I need to talk to you but i know that you wont let me talk so that is why I am writing this letter to you so I can tell you what realy happened with Anika.
Last summer when I moved to Detroit I was realy upset and I never though that I was going to see you again so I was this day out side of my house playing my guiter and met Anika she is beautiful and I failed for her Darcy you need to understand I am a man and I though I was never going to see you again and so me and Anika Went out two time with kisse but nothings else happened. I love you And I know that You love me too so just talk to me and tell me what you think. haaaa---kkeeen
Student ID, please!
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